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A searing pain, blinds my heart
Your deed, which is done
Has been tearing me apart
How long must I wait, for you to see
Your actions caused so much suffering?
Suffering seen only by me

Though you swear, on your grandmother's grave
It does not give you an excuse,
To continually misbehave
There is a time we all must all look ahead
A time to take responsibility,
Not go search for our next bed

I wish you'd open your eyes and look at me
I want you to know what I feel and see
Your heartless actions,
Won't get you far
Simply cutting out my heart,
And placing it in a jar

My soul is screaming your betrayal.
I am crushed from the inside out
I gave you my everything,
And you tear my tender wings
I no no longer have a voice to sing,
The songs you once gave to me
©2005-2009 *Silver-Dragoness
:iconsilver-dragoness:

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My reaction to a betrayal by the person I love the most.

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:icondermarschall:
I like this piece. The feeling of betrayal is direct, straight-forward, and palpable, stark in fact. Oh, you might want to change the first word of the third line of the third stanza to "Your," unless I missed something.
:iconsilver-dragoness:
Ah, thank you. I might have caught that before but never got around to change it. Thanks :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

--
Insanity is only a perception made by those who have yet to attain its greatness. While those of us who have already stepped inside its bounds find bliss in our utter madness.

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